Director's Commentary

Aisha and I decided to record a commentary over our trailer, to talk about various aspects of the trailer, like representation and mise en scene.

Script

Script (including voiceover and character speech, does not include music)

0:30: A phone rings

0:38: Officer: Hello? Police Station?

0:40: Heavy breathing and sobbing

0:41: Mindy: I warned them. I didn't mean to. I warned them.

0:53: Mrs Goodall: Mindy, welcome to Southfield School. We've got one of our English rooms here, on the left...

1:01: Voiceover: New school. And another chance to screw up. Stuck with the popular girl and her perfect boyfriend. Misery never ends. But what can you do to get noticed? I know a way. I have my ways. But they still never notice me.

1:52: Door creaks, sound of footsteps

1:56: Riley: Who is doing this?

1:56: Heavy breathing

2:00: Riley: Stella's gone!

2:04: Heather: What do you think's happened to her?

2:06: Choking/coughing sound

2:07: Fast footsteps and heavy breathing

2:08: Spluttering sound

2:13: Scream

2:15: Door creaks

2:16: Voiceover: I will figure this out!

2:21: Sobbing noises

2:22: Voiceover: There have been three disapperances from Southfield School. Their whereabouts are unknown.

2:25: Gagged screams and struggles

2:28: Scream

2:35: Struggling noises

2:36: Heavy breathing

2:37: Door slams

2:38: Running footsteps

2:38: Riley: Heather's gone too. I know these disapperances aren't just a coincidence.

2:45: Riley: No!

2:48: Heavy breathing, crying

2:55: Door slams

3:02: Scream

3:06: Footsteps

3:14: Voiceover: Sometimes, you have to kill to live.